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Thursday, May 17, 2012
Monday, April 9, 2012
Here is an article posted by my editor Tanya about dialogue:
Thank you T!
I’m not gonna lie, sometimes writing dialogue sucks. (Especially when I’m writing a script. At least with a novel, you can make the narrative carry the weight of your words even if your dialogue is less than witty. But that’s a topic for another post.) So where was I? Oh yes. Dialogue sucks.
If you are an avid reader or you love TV and movies, you might disagree. But if you’re a writer like me, you know what I’m talking about. After a while, nothing our characters say sounds right and everything they DO say starts to either sound retarded or like something Yoda would say. Once in a while, we’ll get a gem of profundity or some comedic gold (or at least we think so anyway). But let’s face it, overall, like poop it all does sound.
It’s completely normal to crank out less than worthy dialogue in a rough draft. Trust me, you are not alone. But you might be wondering…how do I know if my dialogue is GOOD? I mean really good. And how do I go about writing not just good dialogue but AWESOME dialogue?
Well first, let’s take a look at what dialogue DOES. What is its purpose? Most aspiring writers and the general public make the mistake of thinking dialogue is just what the characters SAY. Well yes, that is what dialogue is. But it’s also a tool.
The two first basic goals of dialogue are:
1. Express and enhance character
2. Reveal plot points
By contrast, the basic goal of narration is to set the overall tone and pace of the story. But narration and dialogue do not work independently, they rely on each other. Think of dialogue as your tool for carrying the narration. Every single word your characters say must propel the story forward.
So let’s say you’ve written some dialogue, and you want to check it over. Does it do at least one of these things?
a) Characterize the character. Is it something this character would say? Honestly? And is that how they would say it?
b) Reveal a plot point crucial to telling the story. Can be anything from a small piece of information to a trigger for another character’s next action.
c) Give background information necessary to understanding the story. Where a character is from, or a bad childhood experience. But it has to be necessary.
A quick rule of thumb: If the story can do without it, take it out.
By the way, I’m laying these down with novel writing in mind. The rules of the game change a little bit when it comes to writing a script (also another topic for another post).
Did I miss anything? Share your own dialogue tips (and questions!) in the comments. Your question just might end up in a future post!
Next up: The Different Kinds of Narration and Why Should I Use Them?
Thank you T!
I’m not gonna lie, sometimes writing dialogue sucks. (Especially when I’m writing a script. At least with a novel, you can make the narrative carry the weight of your words even if your dialogue is less than witty. But that’s a topic for another post.) So where was I? Oh yes. Dialogue sucks.
If you are an avid reader or you love TV and movies, you might disagree. But if you’re a writer like me, you know what I’m talking about. After a while, nothing our characters say sounds right and everything they DO say starts to either sound retarded or like something Yoda would say. Once in a while, we’ll get a gem of profundity or some comedic gold (or at least we think so anyway). But let’s face it, overall, like poop it all does sound.
It’s completely normal to crank out less than worthy dialogue in a rough draft. Trust me, you are not alone. But you might be wondering…how do I know if my dialogue is GOOD? I mean really good. And how do I go about writing not just good dialogue but AWESOME dialogue?
Well first, let’s take a look at what dialogue DOES. What is its purpose? Most aspiring writers and the general public make the mistake of thinking dialogue is just what the characters SAY. Well yes, that is what dialogue is. But it’s also a tool.
The two first basic goals of dialogue are:
1. Express and enhance character
2. Reveal plot points
By contrast, the basic goal of narration is to set the overall tone and pace of the story. But narration and dialogue do not work independently, they rely on each other. Think of dialogue as your tool for carrying the narration. Every single word your characters say must propel the story forward.
So let’s say you’ve written some dialogue, and you want to check it over. Does it do at least one of these things?
a) Characterize the character. Is it something this character would say? Honestly? And is that how they would say it?
b) Reveal a plot point crucial to telling the story. Can be anything from a small piece of information to a trigger for another character’s next action.
c) Give background information necessary to understanding the story. Where a character is from, or a bad childhood experience. But it has to be necessary.
A quick rule of thumb: If the story can do without it, take it out.
By the way, I’m laying these down with novel writing in mind. The rules of the game change a little bit when it comes to writing a script (also another topic for another post).
Did I miss anything? Share your own dialogue tips (and questions!) in the comments. Your question just might end up in a future post!
Next up: The Different Kinds of Narration and Why Should I Use Them?
Tuesday, April 3, 2012
I was talking to a friend a little while ago that was asking about the whole book writing journey. There is a lot of good information out there. I have learned that writing the story is the easiest part. Wow, how many times did I have writers block? Quite a few. Whenever you get stuck walk away from your story, dont burn yourself out. For me ideas would always come when I would go and get acupuncture. Funny how that works. When writing, try not to do what my editor calls an info dump! It seems I was famous for that one. Gee do I talk that way too!
The cover for your book is VERY IMPORTANT! So make sure you hire a good company to do your cover. Have a catchy title and good artwork! Streetlight Graphics is a great company, they are very professional. Great people to work with.
When you are done with your book Streetlight will format it for you too! You will want to put it out on Smashwords, Amazon, and Barnes and Noble. Do E-book and print. These days tons of people are doing Kindle and Nook. Make sure you do your research.
I am free to answer questions about writing.
Thanks for listening.
The cover for your book is VERY IMPORTANT! So make sure you hire a good company to do your cover. Have a catchy title and good artwork! Streetlight Graphics is a great company, they are very professional. Great people to work with.
When you are done with your book Streetlight will format it for you too! You will want to put it out on Smashwords, Amazon, and Barnes and Noble. Do E-book and print. These days tons of people are doing Kindle and Nook. Make sure you do your research.
I am free to answer questions about writing.
Thanks for listening.
Everything is coming to fruition. The cover art for Skyra is finished. This is such an exciting moment in my life. Writing a book takes time. Editing, cover art, formatting I could go on forever. I want to give a huge thanks to Lindsay Buroker for her blog on Indie writers. I found Streetlight Graphics through her for my cover art. I highly recommend them. I am so glad I found Lindsay, (thanks Terrie) she is so informative and really does her research. It is good to know that authors are helping other authors. Skyra and her journey will hopefully be ready for print and e-book by the middle of May. I will keep you all updated on our journey.
P.S. If you happen to end up In Between, watch out for the Blue Hag!!!!
P.S. If you happen to end up In Between, watch out for the Blue Hag!!!!
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